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Keita Creation
Vital Statistics:
Name: Keita Takumi
Age/Grade: 16 Freshmen
Gender: Male
Nationality: Japan
Height: 2 Meters
Weight: 178Ib
Appearance: &
Relations: N/a
Sexuality: Straight, not experienced and avoids perverted actions/comments
Preferences:Delicate white skin, well-dressed (fashion, not trashy)
Likes: hugs with good friends, jogging and Basketball
Dislikes:Disrespect, bullying, bad food (What do they dislike in life?)
Back story: Freshman, Basketball player!
Name: Keita Takumi
Age/Grade: 16 Freshmen
Gender: Male
Nationality: Japan
Height: 2 Meters
Weight: 178Ib
Appearance: &
Relations: N/a
Sexuality: Straight, not experienced and avoids perverted actions/comments
Preferences:Delicate white skin, well-dressed (fashion, not trashy)
Likes: hugs with good friends, jogging and Basketball
Dislikes:Disrespect, bullying, bad food (What do they dislike in life?)
Back story: Freshman, Basketball player!
Last edited by Darsh on Thu Dec 26, 2013 12:41 am; edited 2 times in total
Darsh- Freshman
- Posts : 4
Join date : 2013-11-02
Age : 27
Re: Keita Creation
This is why I recommend posting an actual image of your character. Your appearance isn't clear enough. If you're gonna put a description of your character rather than give us an image, you need to be much more descriptive. Also, your "Back story" isn't actually a Back story. A Back story explains step-by-step how your character managed to get into this academy. All I see is that your character enjoys playing basketball. Not to be rude or anything, but this definitely needs improvement.
Your history needs the most improvement. Your history is the story of your character's life; a biography, if you will. Please start your history over and do what is asked. I'd highly recommend being more descriptive with everything at this time to make a better impression.
Please do the things asked above, then reply for a second review.
Your history needs the most improvement. Your history is the story of your character's life; a biography, if you will. Please start your history over and do what is asked. I'd highly recommend being more descriptive with everything at this time to make a better impression.
Please do the things asked above, then reply for a second review.
Edo Nakamura- Graduate
- Posts : 895
Join date : 2013-10-13
Re: Keita Creation
Okay, edited am i ready now? ; - ;
Darsh- Freshman
- Posts : 4
Join date : 2013-11-02
Age : 27
Re: Keita Creation
Well you need to tell how you got to whisper hallows them you should be good.. I wish I could approve you now but I might get in trouble..
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